Police in some countries like England don’t carry guns. Some people don’t approve of this because they think that police with guns gives them security. Others think that police carrying guns decreases crimes. What is your opinion? Give relevant example
Police is liable for assuring social peace and discipline. Having a weapon by police is one of the requirements for maintaining those. In some circumstances, absence of a gun may leads to break of rules and order in the community. But many people think that there is a chance of abuse it by them. In this essay, I will present my opinion of having a weapon by police through some examples of pros and cons of it.
In these days, having a gun by police is inevitable for several reasons. To begin with, there are lot of evidence presently where criminals use hazardous weapon while committing a crim...
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Sentence: In some circumstances, absence of a gun may leads to break of rules and order in the community.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to may and leads
Sentence: Hence they have chances to make wrong decision in wrong places which may results misuse of their gun.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to may and results
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