The chart below show the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spend doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
The bar chart illustrates about the spending time in doing leisure activities on free days by some countries people namely china, America, turkey and Brazil in Greece in August 2019.
Overall, holidays leisure activities divided in three types. Firstly, at the beach, reading books and visiting places. Reading book’s activities at maximum position in Chinese tourist. While Brazilian people send their most time at the beach.
Commence with, American tourists and Turkish tourists spending hours were almost similar in the activities. Such as American people send their most time in reading books almost five hours. However, Turkish people spend same hours at the beach. But visiting places were same in both countries visitors 3 hours.
Secondly, Chinese tourists spend the most time reading books while they spend least time in visiting places 8 hours and 1 hours respectively. Where as, Chinese people spend 3 hours at the beach and Brazilian tourists spend almost double time at the beach and they sped half of time in reading books then Chinese people. Brazilian people were least interested to visit places only 2 hours.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ely china, America, turkey and Brazil in Greece in August 2019. Overall, holi...
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Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...at maximum position in Chinese tourist. While Brazilian people send their most time a...
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Line 7, column 73, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'spend the least'.
Suggestion: spend the least
... the most time reading books while they spend least time in visiting places 8 hours and 1 h...
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Line 7, column 143, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Whereas'?
Suggestion: Whereas
...laces 8 hours and 1 hours respectively. Where as, Chinese people spend 3 hours at the be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, then, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29281767956 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32653763944 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508287292818 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7456737481 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8333333333 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288944334926 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113571994068 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813047603046 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188656505974 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429074488226 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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