Many students choose to study at colleges and universities that are far away from the places where they grew up. Do the benefits outweigh the drawbacks?
Studying at colleges or universities which are far from students’ homes is a trend in this time. Although having an undergraduate life near house is convenient, the independence while staying far from home is much better.
Living far from home is quite inconvenient because a student needs to pay more attention to how to pay the bills beside focusing on learning in schools. This makes students work more to earn a living and the result that studying is not on the top priority and part time jobs exhaust them so hard. Most students in Vietnam try to find a part time job just when they enter in universities or colleges and even though working in a group is essential to solve assessments, they make an excuse for being in working periods and in a long road, there are many consequences they have to face up. However, whether studying far from home or not, the crucial thing is awareness. If a student aware that he or she goes studying to absorb knowledge and be more completed person, living far from home is a better option because this one can improve not just a selfcare system but also independence.
Students living far from home is generally more mature because they need to be the one decides their lives. Facing up by themselves let them see everything with its honest shape. Though it’s quite challenging for the very first time, everything is going to be in a right frame. Instead of burying in books and homework, spending time on learning soft skills like cooking, doing laundry or calculating money needs spending are quite useful and necessary to experience. In Vietnam, freshmen are usually described as naïve people, especially those living far from home but just after a year, it is hard to recognize them because they have changed a lot, their mature and experienced vibe is different.
In conclusion, although studying far from home is challenging for the very first, seems keeping the others’ cold feet, the advantages are still more meaningful because it helps a naïve student be more mature and responsible to their lives.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...studying is not on the top priority and part time jobs exhaust them so hard. Most student...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 336, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... Most students in Vietnam try to find a part time job just when they enter in universitie...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84135977337 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65504842792 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549575070822 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.418326657 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.461538462 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1538461538 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234187228673 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957176644261 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748405832781 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156397315311 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582688455107 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...studying is not on the top priority and part time jobs exhaust them so hard. Most student...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 336, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... Most students in Vietnam try to find a part time job just when they enter in universitie...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84135977337 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65504842792 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549575070822 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.418326657 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.461538462 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1538461538 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234187228673 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957176644261 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748405832781 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156397315311 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582688455107 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.