The charts and the table illustrate the health status and the percentage of nutritional components in rations of two distinct groups of students.
Overall, group A predominantly eats cereals, while group B is prior to consume food with a high fat content. Moreover, the general health of group A seem to be better than group B.
Regarding two pie charts given, the proportion of greasy food in group A accounts for 30%, which is smaller 20 % than that in group B. In addition, the share of fish and cereals in both of groups are similar, with 5% for the former and 35% for the latter. Besides, the figure for vegetables in group A outnumbers that in group B, with 22% and 5%, respectively. As for the remainder, the gap between two groups are negligible, with 8% in group A and 5% in group B.
On the other hand, according to the table, the share of student being overweight and illness in the past year in group A just accounts for nearly a half than group B, with 15% for the former and 32% for the latter. In contrast, the percentage of attendance in classes in group A was remarkerably larger than group B, with and three quarters, respectively.
- The diagrams below give information about the Eiffel Tower in Paris and an outline project to extend it underground 84
- Nowadays more and more young people hold the important positions in the government Some people think that is a good thing while others argue that it is not suitable Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- The charts below give information about the diet and general health of two groups of students Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
- Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 147, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
.... Moreover, the general health of group A seem to be better than group B. Regarding t...
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A account' or simply 'accounts'?
Suggestion: A account; Accounts
... the proportion of greasy food in group A accounts for 30%, which is smaller 20 % than tha...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e, with 8% in group A and 5% in group B. On the other hand, according to the tabl...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'account'?
Suggestion: account
...llness in the past year in group A just accounts for nearly a half than group B, with 15...
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Line 4, column 322, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s remarkerably larger than group B, with and three quarters, respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, moreover, regarding, while, as for, in addition, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53846153846 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69876818941 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495192307692 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7656843388 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.888888889 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 5.23603664747 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152881904647 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880884923991 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414063001268 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113728774088 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235741408647 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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