It is important for people to take a risks both in their professional livea and personal lives Do you thing the advantages of taking risks outweight the disadvantage

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ssional lives as well as personal lives.In my opinion recieving threat on both sid...
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Line 2, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , possiblities
...y to upgrade the career life. Recieving,possiblities into a business life is the most challe...
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Line 2, column 73, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...siness life is the most challenging part of all human beings ,whoever taking a ch...
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Line 2, column 94, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...st challenging part of all human beings ,whoever taking a chance in both lives ma...
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Line 2, column 184, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Assuming
...ood oppurtunity in their bussiness life.Assuming that if there is no any threat in huma...
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Line 2, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in their bussiness life.Assuming that if there is no any threat in human lives th...
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Line 2, column 211, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ssiness life.Assuming that if there is no any threat in human lives then human ...
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Line 2, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ere is no any threat in human lives then human beings cannot achieve progress in ...
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Line 2, column 305, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t achieve progress in life for balancing both lives accepting the challenges pl...
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Line 2, column 317, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ogress in life for balancing both lives accepting the challenges plays a importa...
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Line 2, column 351, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... lives accepting the challenges plays a important role in human lives. Now a d...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...plays a important role in human lives. Now a days many youngester’s are moving towards th...
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Line 3, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...s a important role in human lives. Now a days many youngester’s are moving towards th...
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Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...igner for achiviening better oppurtunity . Although, put in a danger themselves ma...
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Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Although, put in a danger themselves may hamper on their professional life for e...
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Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a danger themselves may hamper on their professional life for eg,if any person f...
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Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
...amper on their professional life for eg,if any person fall in love with some girl ...
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Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in love with some girl and they couldnot take disscion on time then there profees...
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Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... lives as well as personal may be hamper . At the conclusion acepting the challen...
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Line 4, column 83, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... inbussiness life give more oppurtunity in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, then, well, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 161.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13664596273 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21783673581 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 176.041082164 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627329192547 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.344722483 49.4020404114 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.4 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243877222435 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122441315968 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982620422272 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143631086976 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976096381754 0.056905535591 172% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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