A glance at the provided circular charts illustrate the proportion of mothers' occupation patterns among four different age groups of children to care for. In general it is clearly apparent that mothers who have younger children (under 5 years old) mostly unemployed while those who care for 5 years old or older children are part-time worker in majority.
Looking more in detail from the first and second charts from left side, 64% to 70% of mothers of babies and toddlers (under 5 years old) are unemployed while those who have part-time job constitute around one fifth to quarter of the total population. Moreover, full-time employer mothers with younger age group of children to care for only 11%. On the other hand, mothers who take care of 5 years old or older adolescents are more likely to have part-time job at 45% to 48%. However, unemployed moms in 5-9 years old children group are also considerably high at 38% which is higher compared to moms of over 10 years old. Interestingly, the figures of full-time job moms in the oldest group of children are two folds higher among other groups at 29%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
...employed while those who have part-time job constitute around one fifth to quarter ...
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Line 3, column 455, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
...cents are more likely to have part-time job at 45% to 48%. However, unemployed moms...
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Line 3, column 749, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...folds higher among other groups at 29%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, while, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78534031414 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5442656042 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534031413613 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.436316063 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.571428571 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2857142857 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8571428571 5.23603664747 246% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216880385672 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125919900013 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096129215559 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209510420562 0.15604864568 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665033179552 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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