Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Nowadays, wilderness areas in their natural state are getting less and less but the governments are giving more attention to the protection of these “jems “ of a country. In fact, these areas might offer other economic benefits if they develop and loose the wilderness in them. The prompt recommends that nations should pass laws, that give extra attention to preserve these areas. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this suggestion and argue that nation value and maintain their wilderness areas in their natyral state for two reasons.
To begin, the earth’s population is growing and nations are expanding their effect on nature in many ways. Thus, in the place where rivers flew, forests grew and animals lived things have changed a lot. For example, in Albania, a place recommended to be seen, has many untouched places and landmarks.
Among them is a wild river called Vjosa. There were many debates about building dams on this river, which would destroy the river’s beauty and its great effect around. Many people, celebrities and organizations stood up for Vjosa and saved it. Consequently, like Vjosa there are many other beautiful rivers, forests and animals only found in Albania. Tourism is a branch that entertains, gives profits to people and grows the economy. However, some people thing changing these places, taking away their wilderness might outgrow the economy and make some people rich. This is a reason people need to disagree with them, and instead restore their natural places and save them as much as they can.
The above example, illustrates that preserving wilderness is a greater mission than helping some people get rich.
Further, even if we assume that nothing is permanent and it’s ok to change, nations should still think of the clean water that grow in these unpolluted places. For example, there should be no pollution and other factors that spoil the clean sources of drinkable water to many animals that live in there and maybe to millions of people that use it. Water makes up 80% of our body’s mass and people should drink the water which is clean and rich in minerals. Research has shown that the quality of water in these places is much better and should be kept like that as long as people can. In other words, it is not nations who preserve their wild places, not only develop tourism but save their own peoples’ lives by providing clean drinkable water and economic engines. One need to look in the past how many big wild areas were in use of nations and how abundant the resources were for people. Things have gotten worse but we need to save what is left.
Of course, some argue that in our increasingly world population hunting wild places to use for economic gain has gone too far ,but nations need to stop this. If we do so, we are likely to do the best for ourselves. Tourism as a branch in economy will grow, and animals plants and above all, people will get clean water. Saving the wild is the same as saving our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...re attention to the protection of these “jems “ of a country. In fact, these area...
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...ention to the protection of these “jems “ of a country. In fact, these areas migh...
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Suggestion: recommended being
...a lot. For example, in Albania, a place recommended to be seen, has many untouched places and la...
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...Albania, a place recommended to be seen, has many untouched places and landmarks....
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...autiful rivers, forests and animals only found in Albania. Tourism is a branch th...
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...branch that entertains, gives profits to people and grows the economy. However, s...
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...s by providing clean drinkable water and economic engines. One need to look in th...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o use for economic gain has gone too far ,but nations need to stop this. If we do ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, look, may, so, still, thus, for example, in fact, of course, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 14.8657303371 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2478.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 517.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79303675048 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29400060669 2.79657885939 82% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493230174081 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 754.2 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.440333934 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3076923077 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8846153846 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.2758426966 204% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228250757821 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621280351761 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526680462886 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119365491313 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847972675397 0.0667264976115 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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