To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Why do we need to study the characteristics of the society? By studying the characteristics of the society we come to know about the nature of the people and what are the people thinking, new trends and many others things. I agree with the author on the topic that to understand the important characteristics of a society, major cities should be studied. Cities consists of people from different religion, class, race, sex, caste, age. It is a mixture all the types of citizen of a country that comes to city to fulfill their dreams. City is a place where dreams are made and it never stops for anyone.
As the city consist of different people, so their approach and opinion towards different things are different. By studying it one would come to know about the different thoughts of the society. This is very helpful in a business and cooperate world. Let us understand this by an example. If a company wants to launch a product than it could conduct a survey and based on the result, they could come to know how the people in general would react to their product. If the overall result is bad than the company could make the following changes before launching their product. This will help them to increase profit.
If the same survey happens in a rural area, the result may not be accurate. In cities people are more open to new trends and adapt to changes more quicker than in rural areas. In rural area the people usually belonging to same caste, religion, and they usually do not adapt to change quicker. In rural area the people are very close to their roots of cultural and heritage. By, studying the rural area one can only come to know about the cultural value and the practices of the older time. The overall characteristics of a society would not be known.
I am not saying that the rural area is backward or they do not accept the new trends of the society, I am saying that they usually take more time to accept a thing compare to a city. In major city there are development much faster and new technologies are used. So, people have to adapt themself with them or they would be left behind in the race. So, here the people are more open to new things and ideas. So, to understand the most important characteristics of a society, studying the major city would surely give a better result than studying a rural area.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 464, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n general would react to their product. If the overall result is bad than the comp...
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Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'quicker' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: quicker
...open to new trends and adapt to changes more quicker than in rural areas. In rural area the ...
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Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...usually do not adapt to change quicker. In rural area the people are very close to...
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Line 4, column 407, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... are more open to new things and ideas. So, to understand the most important chara...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 422.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5308056872 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48186974992 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4336492891 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.0 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.925973167 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6666666667 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.958333333333 5.21951772744 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.83258426966 310% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235816263026 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724525236265 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953510841136 0.0758088955206 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152089230507 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895145600013 0.0667264976115 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 14.1392134831 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.1639044944 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.38706741573 82% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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