Many supermarkets are selling more and more products that are imported from other countries instead of selling food that is locally sourced Is this positive or negative development

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Many supermarkets are selling more and more products that are imported from other countries instead of selling food that is locally sourced. Is this positive or negative development

It is considered that majority marts prefer to selling foreigner items rather than local ones. I believe that it is constructive development because it enhance the standard of quality and local market.
Tp commence with views, firstly, foreigner products provide high nutrition value. To explicate it, malls try to choose nourished products from allover worlds ,so, they encourage masses to select rich diet for live a healthy life. For epitome, W.H.O (World Health Organization) conducted a survey and revealed that due to good ingredient 60% of multitudes start to give preority for purchasing foreigner items instead of local unhealthy foods. Thus, superstores provide healthy food in comparison of local street food.
Further strengthening views, secondly, these grocery items develop local bussiness. To elaborate it, local businesses began to do effort for improving their business by replacing cheapest products with quality products for increasing positive competition. For instance, ' The Hindustan Times ' published article of chairman of Indian Business association, inwhich he explained that After arriving of foreign products local market has grown up standard wise. At the end, these products help to rise of local market.
In conclusion, foreigner products are not only give contribute to keep individual health but also help in growing up the standard of local bussiness.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62679425837 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78258359384 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665071770335 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7683118451 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.909090909 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171249466879 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692188208671 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0249320167694 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101511443166 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283521273817 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'sell'?
Suggestion: sell
...onsidered that majority marts prefer to selling foreigner items rather than local ones....
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'enhances'?
Suggestion: enhances
... is constructive development because it enhance the standard of quality and local marke...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...standard of quality and local market. Tp commence with views, firstly, forei...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 34, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ket. Tp commence with views, firstly, foreigner products provide hig...
^^
Line 2, column 44, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Tp commence with views, firstly, foreigner products provide high nutritio...
^^
Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e nourished products from allover worlds ,so, they encourage masses to select rich...
^^
Line 2, column 261, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: O
...r live a healthy life. For epitome, W.H.O World Health Organization conducted a s...
^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d in comparison of local street food. Further strengthening views, secondly, t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...on of local street food. Further strengthening views, secondly, these gr...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'replacing the cheapest'.
Suggestion: replacing the cheapest
... effort for improving their business by replacing cheapest products with quality products for incr...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sing positive competition. For instance, The Hindustan Times published article o...
^^
Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion. For instance, The Hindustan Times published article of chairman of Indian ...
^^
Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...chairman of Indian Business association, inwhich he explained that After arrivin...
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Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of Indian Business association, inwhich he explained that After arriving of fore...
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Line 3, column 484, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... has grown up standard wise. At the end, these products help to rise of local mar...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...roducts help to rise of local market. In conclusion, foreigner products are n...
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Line 4, column 25, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...local market. In conclusion, foreigner products are not only give con...
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Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ibute to keep individual health but also help in growing up the standard of local...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62679425837 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78258359384 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665071770335 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7683118451 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.909090909 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171249466879 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692188208671 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0249320167694 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101511443166 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283521273817 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.