Sports help to a greater extent to build peace in world. Do you agree or disagree? Give some examples and include relevant experiences in your response.
Sport is one of the mediums to keep people far from everyday problems and tensions momentarily, therefore relaxed and peaceful. Similarly international sports let people forget all the discriminations among nations and enjoy particular sporting events together. However, excitements in supporters during sports competition may create discomposure. In this essay, I will outline some arguments for and against of sports being helpful to achieve peace in the planet.
Sports significantly contribute in keeping peace in the society in several ways. To begin with, people of that particular country where any sports events going on, try to forget all the sorrows and problems related to their life and enjoy the event whole heartedly. As a consequence, though for a short time, their life fill up with peace and happiness. For example, In Bangladesh, there has been a match of world cup cricket tournament in 2011which brings unforgettable happiness among citizens though the country is surrounded with many problems. On top of that, International sporting events brings nations closure which result a good bonding among them enhancing global peace and harmony. In addition, multinational sports competition may reduce tensions among countries which are created because of political situation.
On the other hand, some situation occurs where global peace destroyed because of sporting events. Firstly, in tournaments such as cricket or football match, supporters become so aggressive that they do harm to each other which eventually may be a scandal for that country. Secondly, the results of extreme competition between two nation’s sports team may reflect in the relationship between countries government which may diminish peaceful attitude.
In conclusion, sports are essential and significant for social, national and even international life though quite a few isolated circumstances may violate peace among nations. In my opinion, sports obviously a means of creating global peace. Authorities should take care that supporters never get a chance to be hostile.
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