The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
the given maps illustrate Norbiton industrial area now and in the future. generally speaking, it can be seen that there will be a large quantity of amenities provided to the town and all factories will be demolished in this new development.
Take a closer look to the details, on the northen side, a new house will be introduced in the the farm land. The river will be separated by a new route which connect the farmland and residential area. There will be a significant changed in factories that all of them will be replaced by houses in the future.
However, in the planned map, public facilities will be installed surrounding the main roundabout. To the north west of the roundabout, a new road will be opened and filled by houses. Another roundabout will also be constructed to connect the road and extended more routes in the Norbiton’ s new development map
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... industrial area now and in the future. generally speaking, it can be seen that there wil...
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...side, a new house will be introduced in the the farm land. The river will be separated ...
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...side, a new house will be introduced in the the farm land. The river will be separated ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, then, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 716.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7417218543 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.847974727 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569536423841 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4018133524 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109696123253 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698546301441 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084631056417 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888775186094 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516514689594 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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