Dear Friend,
I hope this letter finds you in good health and spirits. I am writing to ask you a favor. I am going to take a holiday next month and I need someone to look after my house while I am away. Would you be able to do that for me?
I am planning to visit Thailand for two weeks, from June 15th to June 29th. I have always wanted to see the beautiful temples, beaches and wildlife there. I have booked my flight and hotel online and I am very excited about this trip.
However, I am also worried about leaving my house unattended for so long. That is why I am asking you to help me out. You are the only person I trust with this responsibility. You know where I keep my spare key and how to operate the alarm system. All I need you to do is to check on the house once in a while, water the plants, feed the fish and collect the mail. It should not take much of your time and I would really appreciate it.
To thank you for your kindness, I will bring you some souvenirs from Thailand. Maybe a silk scarf or a Buddha statue or some exotic spices. You can tell me what you prefer when we meet before I go. How about we have lunch together next week? We can catch up on everything and I can give you more details about my house and my trip.
Please let me know if you can do this favor for me. You can call me or text me anytime. I hope to hear from you soon.
Your friend,
Tamanna
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...irits. I am writing to ask you a favor. I am going to take a holiday next month a...
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Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ul temples, beaches and wildlife there. I have booked my flight and hotel online ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, really, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 32.9175257732 185% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1126.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 281.0 206.0 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.00711743772 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06818828167 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565836298932 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.0 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.13402061856 186% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 12.6804123711 173% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5959882429 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 51.1818181818 76.5299724578 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7727272727 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.59090909091 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381951196717 0.216113520407 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118182936872 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942087639676 0.0603063233224 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188956355121 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110419694857 0.0580467560999 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.8 8.37731958763 45% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 93.14 70.7449484536 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 7.45979381443 44% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.09 8.71597938144 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.97 7.59969072165 79% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.