The diagram illustrates the various stages in the
life of a honey bee.
We can see that the complete life cycle lasts
between 34 and 36 days. It is also noticeable that
there are five main stages in the development of
the honey bee, from egg to mature adult insect.
The life cycle of the honey bee begins when the
female adult lays an egg; the female typically lays
one or two eggs every 3 days. Between 9 and 10
days later, each egg hatches and the immature
insect, or nymph, appears.
During the third stage of the life cycle, the nymph
grows in size and sheds its skin three times. This
moulting first takes place 5 days after the egg
hatches, then 7 days later, and again another 9
days later. After a total of 30 to 31 days from the
start of the cycle, the young adult honey bee
emerges from its final moulting stage, and in
the space of only 4 days it reaches full maturity.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...am illustrates the various stages in the life of a honey bee. We can see that t...
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...n see that the complete life cycle lasts between 34 and 36 days. It is also notic...
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... and 36 days. It is also noticeable that there are five main stages in the develo...
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...e five main stages in the development of the honey bee, from egg to mature adult ...
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...e cycle of the honey bee begins when the female adult lays an egg; the female typ...
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...t lays an egg; the female typically lays one or two eggs every 3 days. Between 9 ...
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... two eggs every 3 days. Between 9 and 10 days later, each egg hatches and the imm...
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...later, each egg hatches and the immature insect, or nymph, appears. During the ...
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...third stage of the life cycle, the nymph grows in size and sheds its skin three t...
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...ize and sheds its skin three times. This moulting first takes place 5 days after ...
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...g first takes place 5 days after the egg hatches, then 7 days later, and again an...
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Line 15, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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..., then 7 days later, and again another 9 days later. After a total of 30 to 31 da...
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Line 16, column 52, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... After a total of 30 to 31 days from the start of the cycle, the young adult hone...
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Line 17, column 46, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... of the cycle, the young adult honey bee emerges from its final moulting stage, a...
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...es from its final moulting stage, and in the space of only 4 days it reaches full...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 748.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42603550296 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.98091450298 2.65546596893 75% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603550295858 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8571384106 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 3.83414634146 496% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127050297811 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689786559236 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636982229215 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.050689087072 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792056644739 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...am illustrates the various stages in the life of a honey bee. We can see that t...
^^^
Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...n see that the complete life cycle lasts between 34 and 36 days. It is also notic...
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Line 4, column 51, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... and 36 days. It is also noticeable that there are five main stages in the develo...
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Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...e five main stages in the development of the honey bee, from egg to mature adult ...
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Line 7, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...e cycle of the honey bee begins when the female adult lays an egg; the female typ...
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Line 8, column 52, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...t lays an egg; the female typically lays one or two eggs every 3 days. Between 9 ...
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Line 9, column 47, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... two eggs every 3 days. Between 9 and 10 days later, each egg hatches and the imm...
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Line 10, column 46, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...later, each egg hatches and the immature insect, or nymph, appears. During the ...
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Line 12, column 52, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...third stage of the life cycle, the nymph grows in size and sheds its skin three t...
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Line 13, column 51, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ize and sheds its skin three times. This moulting first takes place 5 days after ...
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Line 14, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...g first takes place 5 days after the egg hatches, then 7 days later, and again an...
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Line 15, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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..., then 7 days later, and again another 9 days later. After a total of 30 to 31 da...
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Line 16, column 52, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... After a total of 30 to 31 days from the start of the cycle, the young adult hone...
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Line 17, column 46, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... of the cycle, the young adult honey bee emerges from its final moulting stage, a...
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Line 18, column 46, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...es from its final moulting stage, and in the space of only 4 days it reaches full...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 748.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42603550296 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.98091450298 2.65546596893 75% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603550295858 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8571384106 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 3.83414634146 496% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127050297811 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689786559236 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636982229215 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.050689087072 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792056644739 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.