Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can government to do help radius this amount of rubbish produced .
In this expeditiously evolving world number of people are making much factory along the country where boondocks. Such as factory's get out of rubbish and smoke. It reason many people claim that protease.
On the one hand. Nowadays a lot of factories are building in country side.
Consequently many people may be having a job. However if the companies developing keep going sothat fabrics length of service. Otherside organization companies sabotage air and environmentally. Atmosphere problems Are a hotly-debated topic that often divides opinion. Haveing considered these points fabrics big companies should be reduce or new and economic organizations must be build near future.Taking everything into consideration Than several environmental problems may be slove and we environmentalism.
Furthermore almost several years later.It clear that everyone near future our planeta will be full rubbish and harmly smoke. So we may be able to clean environmental place.If we environmentally friend for the ecology than we will be able to slove problems. If our country should be build several reserve.I am in broad agreement with those other hand they help us radius pollution.Scientist according to theories developing countries are increasing hit air than other countries
In conclusion, although when we may be able to radius industry cars. We can find almost solutions to some of the problems
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: reasons
...ctorys get out of rubbish and smoke. It reason many people claim that protease. On ...
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...eason many people claim that protease. On the one hand. Nowadays a lot of facto...
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Suggestion: Consequently,
...actories are building in country side. Consequently many people may be having a job. Howeve...
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... points fabrics big companies should be reduce or new and economic organizations must ...
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...organizations must be build near future.Taking everything into consideration Than seve...
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...rthermore almost several years later.It clear that everyone near future our planeta w...
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...ith those other hand they help us radius pollution.Scientist according to theorie...
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... increasing hit air than other countries In conclusion, although when we may be a...
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...y cars. We can find almost solutions to some of the problems
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51162790698 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28039227825 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660465116279 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 75.923565216 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6428571429 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3571428571 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.087600247479 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0289745934309 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028821202936 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0547154991827 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029492881079 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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