Dear Sir or Madam,
I am afraid to regret at having denied at your restaurant a couple of days ago. I would say it was the worst experience I had faced in my life. As a matter of fact, on 16 of June, I had invited my colleagues to your restaurant to treat them as my promotion in the office. Although I reserved a table in advance, your customer service informed me no table was booked. Unfortunately, we had to wait long time to get a table. Furthermore, the main meal we ordered was quite awful. I reckon it was deteriorated as my friends and I became poison. We had to be hospitalized for 24 hours in a general clinic.
Although I complained about miserable services, your staff started arguing and refuse their mistakes. I was quite embarrassed about this situation.
Anyway, I would like to request you to refund my paid because of the bad services you offered us. Moreover, I recommend you to talk with your staff to treat your customers in the best condition.
Best regards,
Elham Tomas
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, furthermore, if, moreover, so, i reckon, as a matter of fact, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53591160221 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78222740861 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624309392265 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6332704025 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.1538461538 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9230769231 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.49484536082 602% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187022189727 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546187728385 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507815354809 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118158572044 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701603859339 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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