Write a paragraph abou the enviroment ( air, water,....)
Our enviroment is nature's most precious and important gift to our human life. It is an eco system where we live, depending on each other to survive. As water is an essential source in our daily living needs, we need it more than ever.Due to human's destruction, water supply is increasing, People wasting water too much that some other places don't have enough water for dwellers who live there. The two main cause of water pollution are trashes in the river, sea and factory waste dumped into the river. This has an huge effect on human health because the water is polluted, it could make people got sick. Although the water is carefully handled, it still has some viruses in it.Also sea animal's life is in danger like turtles, sharks, whales,etc. Every year, there are many turtles got stuck in solid trash or a ton of trash is found in a dead whale's stomach To deal with this problem, we need everyone on the world to gather to preserve the water. For example, at our home we should use water for main purpose and remember to close the water tap after washing your hand. Importantly, stop littering into the sea, river or the factories have to carefully handled the waste before pouring in the river. In conclusion, water pollution is a global problem and it needs our help, preventing it before it affects to the next generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Due
...living needs, we need it more than ever.Due to humans destruction, water supply is ...
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Line 1, column 343, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...g water too much that some other places dont have enough water for dwellers who live...
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Line 1, column 513, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...y waste dumped into the river. This has an huge effect on human health because th...
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Line 1, column 515, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...waste dumped into the river. This has an huge effect on human health because the ...
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Line 1, column 680, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...andled, it still has some viruses in it.Also sea animals life is in danger like turt...
^^^^
Line 1, column 680, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...andled, it still has some viruses in it.Also sea animals life is in danger like turt...
^^^^
Line 1, column 689, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
...t still has some viruses in it.Also sea animals life is in danger like turtles, sharks,...
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Line 1, column 743, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
...s in danger like turtles, sharks, whales,etc. Every year, there are many turtles got...
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Line 1, column 966, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r to preserve the water. For example, at our home we should use water for main pu...
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Line 1, column 1190, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...refully handled the waste before pouring in the river. In conclusion, water pollu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62025316456 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3436986032 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62447257384 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8158439859 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146560944182 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055836128395 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037150165607 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146560944182 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.