Whether or not a person achieves their aims in life is mostly related to luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Achievement is a precious thing that all people want to look forward to. Indeed, the ability of each person is still a key factor to attain their goals. However, some suggested that achievement in life is based on luck. I totally oppose this point because competence and determination are more essential than fortune.
Firstly, the competence of each person plays a vital role in leading to success. Having advanced abilities in any fields, they can find it easy to overcome the serious challeges. Moreover, the competence will help to acquire the professional knowledge and then apply to finding solution. For instance, in order to appreciate a student who is good at something, the teachers mostly rely on student's ability. However, anything which is achieved just through fortune doesn't last long. Then anyone believe that achievement thanks to luck, that's a mistake.
Secondly, attaining their goals is not only in competence but also in determination. Everyone has own key to a pleasant result, but determination is one of the most ultimate weapon to get there. Having resolve in their aim, they can get more power to struggle with difficulties. Futhermore, even if their talent is average, they can use resolve to make themselves better. For example, Thomas Edison is the first person to generate the electric light bulb. Suprisingly, he suffered thounsands of experiments to invent the first light bulb. Instead of fortune, he was acknowledge by all human for his persistence. Thus, luck is only temporary, competence is endlessly.
In conclusion, I strongly disgree the idea of attaining their goals is generally related to fortune. It's beneficial for all members of society to believe that competence and determination are more imparetive in reaching their purposes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27777777778 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93978109488 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621527777778 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8988080445 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.0 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1578947368 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21052631579 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173448992052 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498525052298 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043556326754 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10297331931 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251175500926 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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