People benefit more from travelling in their own country than from travelling to foreign countries.
I agree with the statement that people benefit more from travelling in their own country than from travelling to foreign countries. I think in this way basically for the following three reasons.
First of all, language can be a big issue in this case. Most of us surely aren't comfortable with other language to communicate rather than our native one. If we go to a foreign country for travelling, we may face some troubles in communication with the people of that country. Thus, there might be created a communication gap while maintaining a good communication is a must to ensure a good travelling. For example, when I was in college I went to Nepal for travelling with my friends. Though the country amazed us no doudt but we faced serious problems regarding communication with the Nepalese people. We had in struggle to get some informations from them. But this scenario surely won't be happened if we travel inside our own homeland.
Secondly, time plays a very crucial role regarding my position about the statement. If we travel in our own country we could move to different kinds of places at anytime. There are so many choices to us to travel. There will neither any time restriction issue nor any visa related issue. We can move more flexibly in our own motherland. For example, last year my cousin travelled to England for seven days. He had some issues and that's why he didn't get more than seven days for travelling from the embassy. My friend had suffered a lot in choosing what places he should travel in that short period of time. As a result, his tour wasn't a satisfactory one at all. On the other hand if he did travel in his own country Bangladesh then he could travel so many places within these seven days and that could be a cherished tour for him.
Finally, it costs much higher to travel any foreign countries. First of all, anyone who wants to travel foreign countries he needs to bear a huge amount of expenses for buying ticket of transports (most of the time airplane ticket). Then, in the foreign country he has to spend more bucks to live in a decent hotel or cottage. Moreover, food prices are also quite higher than ours. But in our own coountry it is necessarily not needed to much worry about the cost. For example, once my uncle travelled to Maldives with his family. Maldives is very much expensive for travellimg. You need to spend your moneys continuously if you want a satisfactory tour. My uncle had an experience like this. He had to spend that amount of money that he had not expected. But if he could travel in our country then he could make a grand tour in the whole Bangladesh as here not so much money is needed comaparing with Malduives.
So, I can say that one can get more benefit if he travels in his own country rather than in the foreign countries as for the communication, time flexibility and costs.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lly for the following three reasons. First of all, language can be a big issu...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...g issue in this case. Most of us surely arent comfortable with other language to comm...
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Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...e maintaining a good communication is a must to ensure a good travelling. For example, ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...f we travel inside our own homeland. Secondly, time plays a very crucial role...
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Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...arding my position about the statement. If we travel in our own country we could m...
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Line 5, column 435, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... for seven days. He had some issues and thats why he didnt get more than seven days f...
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Line 5, column 448, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ys. He had some issues and thats why he didnt get more than seven days for travelling...
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Line 5, column 596, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...t places he should travel in that short period of time. As a result, his tour wasnt a satisfac...
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Line 5, column 634, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
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Suggestion: wasn't
...t period of time. As a result, his tour wasnt a satisfactory one at all. On the other...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... could be a cherished tour for him. Finally, it costs much higher to travel ...
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Line 7, column 438, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...n coountry it is necessarily not needed to much worry about the cost. For example,...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s needed comaparing with Malduives. So, I can say that one can get more bene...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, as for, as to, for example, i think, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2352.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 511.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60273972603 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75450408675 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61615511774 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47553816047 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 737.1 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5602510766 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.96875 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.59375 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392664589884 0.236089414692 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101207930579 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146996230921 0.0737576698707 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31138760612 0.150856017488 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.166426970568 0.0645574589148 258% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lly for the following three reasons. First of all, language can be a big issu...
^^^^
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...g issue in this case. Most of us surely arent comfortable with other language to comm...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...e maintaining a good communication is a must to ensure a good travelling. For example, ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f we travel inside our own homeland. Secondly, time plays a very crucial role...
^^^^
Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...arding my position about the statement. If we travel in our own country we could m...
^^
Line 5, column 435, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... for seven days. He had some issues and thats why he didnt get more than seven days f...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 448, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ys. He had some issues and thats why he didnt get more than seven days for travelling...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 596, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...t places he should travel in that short period of time. As a result, his tour wasnt a satisfac...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 634, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...t period of time. As a result, his tour wasnt a satisfactory one at all. On the other...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... could be a cherished tour for him. Finally, it costs much higher to travel ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 438, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...n coountry it is necessarily not needed to much worry about the cost. For example,...
^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s needed comaparing with Malduives. So, I can say that one can get more bene...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, as for, as to, for example, i think, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2352.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 511.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60273972603 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75450408675 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61615511774 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47553816047 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 737.1 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5602510766 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.96875 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.59375 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392664589884 0.236089414692 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101207930579 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146996230921 0.0737576698707 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31138760612 0.150856017488 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.166426970568 0.0645574589148 258% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.