In recent times, transportation facilities are growing rapidly as a result it has become more convenient and cheaper for the travellers to travel to multiple countries. In my opinion, it is beneficial to have in tourist in a country for the development rather than restrict them from entering.
Technology's are constantly advising every year, which tend people to adapt towards the modern commute way, which helps them to save time .The most important advantage of increased travel opportunities across the nation helps to enhance the tourism economy generated. For example Goa estate in India produces majority of their income from the tourism sector as compared to other sectors. Additionally, it helps improving the local business like fisheries, clothwears, tiny restrurants and so on. In other words, tourism is considered as a major factor which decides the stability of a country.
However, there are several detrimental impact on a country of sore rate of visitors .As a large number of passengers arrival to a particular country lead to high rate of crimes as well as intermixing of cultures. For instance, the capital of Thailand, Bangkok criminal activities are climbing up constantly which compelled the government to impose restrictions on entry of visitors. But it did not continued for a long period of time because tourism was one of their major source of income. This shows the significant of tourists.
To conclude I strongly believe that pricing numbers in traveller can bring out more advancement as compared to the destruction that they make.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to improve' or 'improve'.
Suggestion: to improve; improve
...o other sectors. Additionally, it helps improving the local business like fisheries, clot...
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Suggestion: As
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'continue'
Suggestion: continue
...ns on entry of visitors. But it did not continued for a long period of time because touri...
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Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56846473029 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.93102669172 2.80592935109 140% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659751037344 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.910303969 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172097574949 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572998200174 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521062385614 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100529748527 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652766864701 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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