Some feel that governments should prioritize healthcare instead of other important areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the skyrocketing population, it has become mandatory for nations have state of the art medical infrastructure. Therefore, most people believe that governments should increase their focus on improving their health facility rather than investing in other fields. I concur with this statement and will elaborate my views further in the below paragraphs.
Undoubtedly, it is a key responsibility of any government to provide for the need of their citizens basic healthcare requirements. This is necessary because a lot of them especially in underdeveloped and developing nations, suffer drastically due to the lack of proper treatment while others face challenges due to the unavailability of a professional healer. Subsequently, it becomes the duty of the state officials to appoint doctors and nurses appropriately, meanwhile taking care of the funding as well. To corroborate further, considering the case of countries with overpopulation like India, a simple bedding or a private hospice facility is a hard nut to crack. Hence, it is extremely imperative for such nation to channel their money towards this field.
It is crucial that the government starts funding their hospitals and pharmacies above all other ventures. Contributing in sectors like Information technology, the nuclear or petroleum industry seems a waste of tax money as these innovations not only harms the existence of mankind but also deteriorates the earth like a silent killer. Instead, investments in technologies to develop a cancer drug or to combat deadly viruses seems more preferable. After all a country’s economy largely depends on its healthy manpower.
In conclusion, it is evident for the politicians to keep their labs, research centers and hospitals as a top most priority while deciding a budget, as it is an essential pillar to stay viable in the market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, so, therefore, well, while, after all, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41522491349 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24362305211 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650519031142 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0952938063 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.384615385 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0725298805462 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0241900244698 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034626633419 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0386890497181 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231621706487 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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