There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Different culture or country across the world has different types of music in various eras. No one can deny that there are numerous advantages and benefits of music. It is often argued that traditional melody is the best while others think that international music has its own dimension. This essay agrees that music can heal us in an array of ways. This essay will discuss both types of music.
Music is a therapy to all of us. It helps to change mood and fills our mind with peace. Power of music can help to increase concentration level and listening capability. There are divisions in various types of music like traditional or international. Both have its own specialities and way of singing.
Traditional music are more focused on basic foundation of musical notes. One must have a strong base and musical concept to sing properly. Therefore, it s strongly agreed that having adequate knowledge in ground level ideas is necessary. For an example, when a student start learning music, teachers always recommend to have strong conception of music from the classical music.
In other hand, internal music is the next level which requires the basic understanding of tune. It is a good mix and match of various notes. People are more into this kind of composition as it contains several styles of using words that grabs attention of current generation. Therefore, this essay disagrees that international music can be considered as father of music. For instance, pop, hard rock music are popular among teenagers but in order to play this music one must know the vocal classical version.
Nowadays, international music overpowers the traditional music. But, to sing any international song, it is necessary to know the basics of tune. Therefore, I believe, traditional music will always hold its own place being the pillar of music world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend having'.
Suggestion: recommend having
...t start learning music, teachers always recommend to have strong conception of music from the cla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04901960784 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75406448788 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1999192709 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.2272727273 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9090909091 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.453464719446 0.244688304435 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157317043777 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10620016585 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291554659785 0.151304729494 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513427262098 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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