In the past, people chose to live in the same place for the rest of their life. Today it is common that some people move to another country to live several times during their life. What are the reasons ? Is it a positive or negative development ?
Residing in many nations is enjoying an upsurge of popularity in recent years in comparison to people in former times who decided to live their whole life in one location. This essay will discuss about the reasons for this development and secondly think that it is a positive development.
One obvious reason for this situation is that a variety of job opportunities are available in different places. By this I mean, many people choose to move to another nation to ensure their livelihood and the growth of career prospect. Another important reason that needs to be taken into account is the development of transportation. With a range of vehicles such as airplanes, cars, bus, trains which can help the employees to move from one place to another place.
In my perspective, this situation could be beneficial in terms of widening the horizons. Living in many nations is a prosperous chance which can help you understand about other cultures and customs. Living in Africa is an excellent example of this situation as people will accumulate profound knowledge because of understanding about their lifestyle, their sufferings derived from harsh living conditions.
In conclusion, with all merits above, this development can exert a positive impact on our lives because of its prospects of helping people to gain knowledge and erase the discrimination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, i mean, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19178082192 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94447975201 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593607305936 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7689025522 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.7 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28236812021 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103764091333 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061298299927 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171309015927 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414528887726 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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