The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Leadership, by it's definiton means that ability of a person to guide people towards the specific goals. These goals are reached only if the leader is in coordination with its subordinates. The prompt address that to make the youth ready to lead in any sector of the society they must be made sensible towards the cooperation rather than the competition. I mostly agree with this point of view for two reasons that will be highlighted below. However, I do concede that competition among youth leads to the advancement in the development process.
First of all, to prepare any youth for leading in any field, be it government or industry or any other field, it is important that these youth give importance to the cooperation rather than competition. It is because the more cooperative a people is the more he or she is likely to succeed in their life. Only those who can handle any situation with tact and politice can win people's heart and lead the people in an effective way. For instance, Barack Obama , the former president of USA, was able to successfully complete his tenure because he implemented the method of cooperation rather than competition in his policies. Also, in any organization, the feeling of compeition among the employees won't lead the company anywhere. But if there is cooperation among them then they can solve any problems. Hence, youth must have a sense of cooperation to lead themselves towards the brighter future.
Secondly, competition in any field can result in the destruction of that field. People working with the feeling of competition among the employees avoid taking help form others because they want to perform better than them . But they might end up using much more resources than they would have used if they had coordinated with their collegue.And a successful leader is the one who knows how to lead the line by taking all the people with him in harmony. For instance, any problem in the company can be easily solved if the problem solving process includes all of its employees. So, harmony among the people can reduce the hurdles of life and ease the difficultes .
However, I do concede that competition among the youths can lead to the development of certain sectors. For example competition in the scientific sector results in betetr advancement of the technology. Laptop ws invented because scientists wanted to compete with the makers of computers and exceed them. Having said this, I still believe that these advancement would become much easier process if people would coordinate with each other . So, ability to create coordination is a challenging task and if a leader can create cooperation among people he is likely to succedd in any field.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 1.00243902439 1496% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 5.60731707317 767% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 33.7804878049 189% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 3.97073170732 730% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2248.0 965.302439024 233% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 453.0 196.424390244 231% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96247240618 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 3.73543355544 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7673250443 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 106.607317073 205% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483443708609 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 707.4 283.868780488 249% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 8.94146341463 246% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4834677814 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.181818182 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5909090909 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 3.70975609756 458% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250315736505 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725200990329 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440404916245 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15927479791 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369653405414 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 40.7170731707 238% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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