Whether corporations have it on their shoulder to contribute to the good state of societies and environments, or make the maximum profit possible within their functioning jurisdiction, is debatable. The prompt presents both sides of the coin. In my opinion, corporate houses should be able to produce outcomes that simultaneously improves the wellbeing of the society and the natural environment, and the income level of its stakeholders. There can be two reasons for such neutral stand point.
No corporate house can function without its human resource, which also the society constitutes of; and without the wellbeing of the human resource, the corporation is likely to stagger and fall apart. For example, during COVID-19, the management body of Hotel InterContinental, Dhaka, Bangladesh overlooked the importance of taking preventive measures laid out by WHO, resulting in a large number of its employees to contract the virus. More employees fell ill and took sick-leaves, undermining the productivity of the Five-Star Hotel, leading to a consequent fall of earnings and profits in their business. As a knock-on-effect, many employees were laid off. This example is pertinent due to the fact that when corporations ignore the responsibility of promoting the health of its human resources, it can backfire and cause the organization a major disaster. If they are to remain responsible for their flourish, promoting the health of its employees is indispensable.
The same theory of backfire applies to the situation where corporations pollute the environment. If the immediate environment, like air, around a textile factory is polluted by the smokes the chimneys create, its own employees can contract acute respiratory infections, reducing their productivity, and consequently reducing the money the factory makes.
It is also imperative that the corporations should make as much money as possible, to protect the business and its employees. This is because when employees earn more, they can be more motivated to serve that corporation. Furthermore, the more the profits, the more that corporate house can contribute to the economic growth of the country the corporation is a part of. When the economic growth is flourishing, the corporate house itself can benefit from the situation. Hence, to reap its own benefits, the corporation should equally be responsible to have a profit motive. Otherwise, the business cannot be sustained.
To sum it up, the issue is complex and a partisan view cannot be possessed, since both the responsibility to promote social and environmental wellbeing, and to raise its profit are central to the progress and flourish of the corporate itself.
- Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the wellbeing of the societies and environments in which they operate Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations provided they operate within the law is to make as muc 83
- 94 The effectiveness of a country s leaders is best measured by examining the well being of that country s citizens Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim In developing and supporting your position 75
- GRE Issue Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reason 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: CONSTITUTES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'consists of'?
Suggestion: consists of
... human resource, which also the society constitutes of; and without the wellbeing of the human...
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Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: Whom
... taking preventive measures laid out by WHO, resulting in a large number of its emp...
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Line 3, column 383, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... measures laid out by WHO, resulting in a large number of its employees to contract the virus. Mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, look, so, well, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2277.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 419.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43436754177 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21772903887 2.79657885939 115% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520286396181 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 711.9 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.6113951593 60.3974514979 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.842105263 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0526315789 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78947368421 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191324405223 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604134925583 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524376445113 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105149635042 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423283103323 0.0667264976115 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 100.480337079 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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