At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large
number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

The average age of the population for many nations around the class="world">world has been in
decline in recent decades creating a situation where class="young">young people class="have">have become
the class="world">world’s largest demographic, particularly in developing nations. Although
there are decided drawbacks to this phenomenon related to expertise in the
workforce, class="it">it class="is">is class="still">still a positive development because class="it">it class="will">will lead to booming
economies in the coming years.
The most frequently cited class="drawback">drawback to having a predominately class="young">young population
class="is">is the lack of skilled workers in many important industries. A great example of this
can be seen in class="vietnam">vietnam, which has one of the class="youngest">youngest populations in the class="world">world.
class="vietnam">vietnam currently has very few leaders in important areas like engineering and
technology. When class="it">it came time for Ho Chi Minh city to build a subway system,
there were not enough skilled engineers to accomplish the feat. they had to hire
a huge number of specialists from Japan and class="thailand">thailand to ensure the quality of the
project. The potential engineers for this project are class="still">still in school in class="vietnam">vietnam or
studying abroad and class="it">it may be another decade before they are ready to design
and execute large, complex infrastructure. class="it">it class="is">is not uncommon for developing
countries with class="young">young populations to require outside assistance for national
projects to the detriment of their own workers.
Despite this class="drawback">drawback, the advantage of a class="young">young population class="is">is class="that">that class="it">it brings many
future benefits to a country and class="is">is a key indicator of future economic prosperity.
Japan famously has one of the oldest populations in the class="world">world and this has led
them into a deep economic recession over the last 20 years as class="it">it becomes
increasingly apparent class="that">that the class="nation">nation class="will">will class="have">have to assume responsibilities related
to healthcare and a dwindling workforce. Contrast this with the so-called ‘Tiger
Economies’ of Southeast Asia class="that">that include class="thailand">thailand, class="vietnam">vietnam, Indonesia and
Singapore. These countries class="have">have some of the class="youngest">youngest populations in the class="world">world,
which, coupled with a growing middle class and better education, means class="that">that
they class="will">will enjoy upward economic growth for decades to come. The middle class
class="will">will expand because well-educated graduates class="will">will be able to get good jobs and
this middle class class="will">will become a consumer class class="that">that feeds the economy. Overall,
this class="is">is why having a class="young">young population class="is">is desirable for any class="nation">nation.
In conclusion, I fully believe class="that">that a younger population indicates a country class="is">is going
to be successful in the future. The key element for all class="young">young populations class="is">is
education and governments should focus on this in order to fully exploit the
benefits of their demographic.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, still, well, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3746.0 1615.20841683 232% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 430.0 315.596192385 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 8.71162790698 5.12529762239 170% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 9.20165174346 2.80592935109 328% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544186046512 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 1017.0 506.74238477 201% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.4 1.60771543086 149% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 5.43587174349 368% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.1850815078 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 220.352941176 106.682146367 207% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 25.2941176471 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.05882352941 7.06120827912 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 35.0 4.38176352705 799% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.041048142611 0.244688304435 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0312343104547 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0173306625719 0.0667982634062 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0273993011889 0.151304729494 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309904873938 0.056905535591 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.2 13.0946893788 246% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -21.58 50.2224549098 -43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.5 11.3001002004 199% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 33.53 12.4159519038 270% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 23.0 10.7795591182 213% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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