The layouts give information about how a town transformed after the erection of a hydroelectric power dam.
In general, it is noticeable that there were many apparent differences in the infrastructure of the town during the period shown. Also, the most obvious change is the appearance of a hydroelectric dam to the north of a river.
As can be seen from the plans there was a river which ran through the town from south to north. In 1990, several areas, such as a forest, an ancient structure, a shelter of rare plants and animals, and irritated farmland, surrounded both sides of a river. However, by 2010, all of them had been wiped out, making way for 8 high voltage power poles. Besides, the villages, which used to be located quite far from the river, were relocated next to the river.
A hydroelectric power dam was constructed to the north of the river, in order to blocking river flows. A large lake with fishing activities was built in the north of the town. Moreover, there was an the addition of a two-floored hotel in the southeast of the lake
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...roelectric dam to the north of a river. As can be seen from the plans there was a ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s constructed to the north of the river, in order to blocking river flows. A larg...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... north of the town. Moreover, there was an the addition of a two-floored hotel in ...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'an' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: an; the
... north of the town. Moreover, there was an the addition of a two-floored hotel in the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, moreover, so, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64893617021 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75880827304 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590425531915 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.9793385457 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.4 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21783681572 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895570321474 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100371258466 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163240182058 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928470391475 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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