Some scientists believe that in the future computers will be more intelligent than human beings. While some see this as a positive development, others worry about the negative consequences.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
You should write at least 250 words.
In this technology-driven era, it is opined that computers will outsmart humanity in the foreseeable future. This has led to a divergence of opinions on whether this practice will pose a threat or render merits to human beings. From my perspective, both points of view are grounded to a certain extent.
On the one hand, the superiority in intelligence of computers can bring about a plethora of benefits to humans, chief among which is better utilization of available resources. Expanding on this point, carefully calculated algorithms and complex mechanisms enable computers to do tasks with paramount accuracy and efficiency. Therefore, such invention can take responsibility for mundane tasks that require high precision and time. This allows humans to contribute more money and efforts to sophisticated duties which are based on moral grounds as well as creativity. Another worth-mentioning advantage is the advent of unprecedented breakthroughs. Unlike humans’ brains, computers are not confined to any constraint, including age, memory capacity or information processing speed. Accordingly, given its advanced intelligence and virtually boundless ability, AI is likely to create groundbreaking inventions that will possibly solve a profusion of problems of humanity.
On the flip side of the coin, there are also compelling reasons to argue that exceedingly intelligent computers can imperil society. The key catalyst is an increased rate of unemployment. Greater intelligence in computers can lead to the extension of their capabilities, concomitantly resulting in reduced employability of the human workforce. To exemplify, programmers may experience redundancy on a large scale due to AI’s ability to produce accurate solutions in seconds. Furthermore, without proper guidance and sufficient information, computers may put people’s lives in jeopardy. As such technology lacks emotions, it may do whatever it takes to complete its given objective, even manipulating humans or viewing them as hostiles if needed. Hence, a dystopia in which mankind is enslaved by a highly intelligent AI is rather possible.
To recapitulate, the future when computers are smarter than humans can be a double-edged sword by virtue of the above-mentioned pros and cons. Nevertheless, I still hold my ground that the negative impacts will outshadow the positive ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, still, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2019.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70338983051 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3986525974 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655367231638 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0251658535 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.263157895 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6315789474 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94736842105 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198070411256 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513742837306 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394638674255 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125081724814 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388534820897 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.6 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 78.4519038076 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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