The main benefit of the study of history is to dispel the illusion that people living now are significantly different from people who lived in earlier times.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
History had a diverse impact on the lives of people to date and will have the same impact forever. It created a pathway between the timelines and the events so that people can be connected with the evolution and automation of the world and lives. It had always taught us many things. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with the fact that the main benefit of the study of history is to dispel the illusion that people living now are different from the people who lived in earlier times. The following three points will put some more light on it.
Firstly, many historical events have taught people the way to live their lives in a better and peaceful way. For instance, the wars that occurred in the past had proved that it’s very important for people to solve problems and come out with peaceful solutions. In other way, wars have always created a nuisance and bought major damage to the economy and lives .keeping this in view, people started resolving issues in a peaceful way, by communicating and finding a good and feasible solution rather than going to war.
The times where people needed a democratic and sovereign rule to take proper decisions and have a leading team for problem-solving is probably the second point out. For instance,to take a decision and come to a single decision , because of mixture of opinions and difference of point of views in the past events of history , people decided to appoint a governing body to solve all these issues. It made the lives of people more better and less chaotic.
History had been a reason to take the research of scientists further and continue it which was the major reason for automation. for instance,Thomas Alva edition's research and development of electric bulbs lead other scientists to build electrical appliances which transformed the way humans lived. It made human lives much easier and more comfortable leading to more automation and the betterment of society.
Of course, the main benefit of the study of history was to remove the illusion that people living now are different from people who lived earlier. However, it was very important for people to learn history to show how lives of people change with time. History reveals how the lives of people changed significantly. It is the leaving proof of how people started adapting to the changes that occurred as an influence of the past historical events.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 311, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'disagree that'.
Suggestion: disagree that
... many things. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with the fact that the main benefit of the study of histor...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ht major damage to the economy and lives .keeping this in view, people started res...
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Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a peaceful way" with adverb for "peaceful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...n view, people started resolving issues in a peaceful way, by communicating and finding a good an...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , to
...bably the second point out. For instance,to take a decision and come to a single de...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...a decision and come to a single decision , because of mixture of opinions and diff...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t of views in the past events of history , people decided to appoint a governing b...
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Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...ese issues. It made the lives of people more better and less chaotic. History had been a...
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...ch was the major reason for automation. for instance,Thomas Alva editions research ...
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Suggestion: , Thomas
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nfluence of the past historical events.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, so, as to, for instance, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 407.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87960687961 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56788442184 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481572481572 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2248992175 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6111111111 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364032657022 0.243740707755 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130222047477 0.0831039109588 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145418496412 0.0758088955206 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206531608843 0.150359130593 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123653586739 0.0667264976115 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.