The maps give information about the design of a school in 2004 and plans for its development in 2024.
In general, the site of a school will soon witnesses some radical changes with the most noticeable being the addition of a school building and a car park to respond the increasing of students in 2024.
One interesting change is that a car park will be constructed to the East of the site to have more areas for 1,000 students in 2024. A road will be erected that connected from an old parking lot to a new parking lot. In addition, the path will be cut shorter which leads from the main entrance with a new car park.
Besides, the sports field will be relocated on the South which opposites the second parking lot. What is more, the third school building will be built to meet the increasing number of students in 2024. Moreover, the first school construction will be linked with the second building of school to make it easier for students to move.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: YS89
Essay Categories
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, moreover, second, so, third, as for, in addition, in general, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49425287356 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44152109033 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 220.5 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7769679529 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.75 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 5.23603664747 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254549332618 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128773138999 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110971221067 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194978881937 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842095439747 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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