The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned 4s future development of the site.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate some proposed changes to the industrial area of the town named Norbiton
As can be seen clearly from the maps, the most noticeable change of this area is the appearance of houses and others infrastructure in order to make it become a residental area.
In terms of the road system, a small roundabout will be constructed on the south of the map, which is adjacent to the larger one taking place at the center of the area. Furthermore, this system will enlarge to the north and northwest side of the map, especially the new road which will lie to the north will go across the river to the other side of the map. However, the farmland and the town will still be remained on the top and on the left side of the map respectively.
When it comes to the other infrastructure, the most significant change is all the factories will be replaced by a multitude of houses, which will take place in close proximity to the road and nearby the farmland. Moreover, shops and medical centre will be erected in this area, which held on the southwest and southeast of the big roundabout. On the east of the map, there will be a new education institution and on the way to the school is the introduction of the playground, which is opposite the farmland
- The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned 4s future development of the site Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 16, column 161, Rule ID: CLOSE_SCRUTINY[1]
Message: Use simply 'proximity'.
Suggestion: proximity
...ude of houses, which will take place in close proximity to the road and nearby the farmland. Mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61842105263 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70717089195 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495614035088 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.7683816113 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.428571429 112.824112599 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5714285714 22.9334400587 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100153708899 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531911675191 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483260436998 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923132577339 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669393925045 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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