According to the reading passage, it is stated that since the growth of the broccoli is restricted to the cooler regions, scientists are trying to create a new type of it that can be grown on the regions despite their hotter summers. The article provides some benefits of this action. However, the lecturer refutes the assumptions made in the reading passage and presents three solid reasons to challenge them.
Firstly, the reading claims that as the transportation costs of the locally produced broccoli decreases, broccoli costs for consumers fall. The professor casts doubt on this point by saying that this approach will not necessarily make the broccoli cheaper. She states the new created broccoli would have lower yields than the traditional one, and its production rate is less, which in turn, requires to be sold more pricely.
Secondly, the article posits that because the new type of broccoli is being produced by traditional breeding ways, unlike the public belief it will probably be more desirable and more safe. In contrast, the professor says that whatever it be, public still might be suspicious of it. According to her, since the financial aid of this program comes from the same companies that use genetic modifications, people may distrust this approach.
Finally, the reading says that locally grown broccoli is much more healthier because it can be consumed right after harvesting. The professor opposes this point by explaining that there are other vegetables that have the similar nutrients, such as Kale, which has compatible health benefits, and it can be picked up even in the winter and fall. Therefore, she believes educating people about eating fresh locally available vegetables can be more beneficial than breeding new type of broccoli.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...urn, requires to be sold more pricely. Secondly, the article posits that becaus...
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...st, the professor says that whatever it be, public still might be suspicious of it...
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Line 4, column 68, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'healthier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: healthier
...ays that locally grown broccoli is much more healthier because it can be consumed right after ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1373.03311258 108% => OK
No of words: 286.0 270.72406181 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1993006993 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62045850523 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 145.348785872 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56993006993 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 419.366225166 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9099938663 49.2860985944 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.916666667 110.228320801 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 21.698381199 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06452816374 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258830812041 0.272083759551 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938082995604 0.0996497079465 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611793703285 0.0662205650399 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160979444354 0.162205337803 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350658834856 0.0443174109184 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 63.6247240618 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...three solid reasons to challenge them. Firstly, the reading claims that as the ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urn, requires to be sold more pricely. Secondly, the article posits that becaus...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...st, the professor says that whatever it be, public still might be suspicious of it...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ns, people may distrust this approach. Finally, the reading says that locally g...
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Line 4, column 68, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'healthier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: healthier
...ays that locally grown broccoli is much more healthier because it can be consumed right after ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1373.03311258 108% => OK
No of words: 286.0 270.72406181 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1993006993 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62045850523 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 145.348785872 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56993006993 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 419.366225166 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9099938663 49.2860985944 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.916666667 110.228320801 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 21.698381199 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06452816374 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258830812041 0.272083759551 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938082995604 0.0996497079465 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611793703285 0.0662205650399 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160979444354 0.162205337803 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350658834856 0.0443174109184 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 63.6247240618 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.