In recent times, computer is the most significant invention that human have. Not only bring people together, but also helping us on gaining more knowledge. Especially, some develop country having primary school system that encourage the student to use computer as a study equipment. In my opinion, by using computer correctly, computer bring more advantages to our young generation than bad habits.
As we know that smart devices bring the convenient for our work and study, while in the past, most of the student gained knowledge by limitation of books or resources that they had in their area. One benefit of computer is providing our children a great source of knowledge with various type of media such as: book, magazine, newspaper, TV programs, etc. For example, Kids are attracting to different type of learning methods which computer can reach to the resources through out internet. Not only that, computer also bring the adaption of technology to our young generation faster, let them curious about the widen of our world rather than the small town in which they lived.
In the other hand, without the control of using smart devices, the curiousness as well as unable to identify between good or bad programs for kids, therefore, children maybe poison with harmful channel such as doing risky challenges, games with violation content or horror movie and more. Parents play an important role in educating their children on using computer to avoid the negative effect.
With the point given above, I think that computer is one of the best study equipment that our young generation have to understand and learn more knowledge, and that positive effect will be maintaining if their parents taking care of there kids by managing how and what content that their child is searching.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 469, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...ich computer can reach to the resources through out internet. Not only that, computer also ...
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Line 3, column 608, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...neration faster, let them curious about the widen of our world rather than the small town...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08474576271 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51813075044 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613559322034 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.1588645415 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.363636364 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8181818182 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235337920918 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908840956902 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569007863117 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141859601844 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510499437898 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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