Some people believe that increasing violence in the media is the cause of increasing violence in our society, especially among children. Others believe that children's peer groups and parental role models are a much more powerful influence on children's behavior.
Children are the greatest imitators of all time. They grow up watching everything around them. Children look up to their parents, siblings and friends while growing up. Its very common to say you behave like your dad, you do certain things like your mom, or you have picked this habit from your friends etc. In this modern tech world its not uncommon for children to be exposed to social media at a very tender age. Children can see the entire world's behaviour on their fingertips. However this is not their entire day routine. Children go to school, attend extra curricular classes such as swimming, dancing, cricket classes etc. At such places they come across many peers of their age. At home they are surrounded by their family members. In an entire day, their exposure to social media usage is minimal compared to the time spent in schools and other places. Since children are constantly surrounded by these people, inadvertently their influence on children is more powerful than the social media. They imbibe values from their parents and friends. Even though they can see scoial media, cultural values, moral education are learnt from people who practice around them in their day to day life. And no parents, or teachers would proliferate violence when the children are present with them. Young minds are inclined to learn not from books but from the behavioural patterns of the people around them. Also many parents have a control on the social media usage of the children. Parents can control the kind of content their child consumes. Hence the chances of children viewing such violent content are less. Its important for parents to practice good deeds, moral ethics and cultural values so their child can automatically learn from them. Children look upto them as role models. The role of parents and friends leave an lasting impact on children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 445, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...tender age. Children can see the entire worlds behaviour on their fingertips. However ...
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Line 1, column 483, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...e worlds behaviour on their fingertips. However this is not their entire day routine. C...
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Line 1, column 1383, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...ks but from the behavioural patterns of the people around them. Also many parents have a control on th...
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Line 1, column 1407, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ral patterns of the people around them. Also many parents have a control on the soci...
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Line 1, column 1545, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...e kind of content their child consumes. Hence the chances of children viewing such vi...
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Line 1, column 1825, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
.... The role of parents and friends leave an lasting impact on children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, so, while, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 312.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94551282051 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29413530296 2.79657885939 82% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548076923077 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2814372824 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.1363636364 118.986275619 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.1818181818 23.4991977007 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20803639921 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072691008199 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652531709693 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20803639921 0.150359130593 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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