The charts below give Information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy In 2000 and projections for 2050.
The given charts depict the proportion of three different age levels in two countries, Yemen and Italy and also forecasts for the year 2050.
It is observed that in 2000, the highest percentage of inhabitant in Yemen was obtained by the age below 14 years at 50,1 % and estimate to fall dramatically with 37,0 % . The population of 15-59 years obtained 46, 3% and predict to be the highest proportion at 57, 3 %. The least proportion was 60 plus years at 3, 6% which is expect to marginally increase with 5, 7%.
On the other countries, there was a striking distinction trends of Italy that the range of 15-59 years was occupied the biggest proportion to 61, 6% in 2000, whereas expected to slightly decrease at 46, 2% in 2050. Followed by 60 plus group which was obtained the higher number than it is in Yemen, 24% and predicted to steadily increase at 42, 3%. And the least number was below 14 years with 14, 3 % and predict to decrease at 11, 5 %.
To sum it up, it is noticeable that both countries are predicted to decrease the proportion of 0–14 years and the amount of 60 plus years will follow an upward trend.
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