Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have the freedom to do any sports or activity. Which statement do you agree with? Explain your opinion in a paragraph
All sports activities have varying degrees of danger associated with the risk element of getting seriously injured or losing one’s life is quite high. Therefore, some people are of the opinion that the government should ban life-threatening, health-threatening sports while others believe people should have a choice to do any sports or activities. Both sides of the argument have valid points, and in this essay, I will explore both views and give my personal opinion on this matter.
On the other hand, it is also important to recognize the benefits of risky sports. Allowing individuals to make their own decisions about which sports they participate in can lead to a more active and engaged population. People who participate in extreme sports often have a strong passion for the sport, and their enjoyment of it can bring a sense of fulfillment to their lives. Additionally, many of these sports require considerable preparation and training, which can result in physical and mental benefits for the participants.
However, extreme sports not only put participants at a high risk of serious injury but also innocent bystanders and young children. These days, social media platforms are flooded with videos of dangerous sports. These types of videos can be hugely influential, especially for young people who try to imitate the behavior and end up injuring themselves and others.
Moreover, prohibiting risky sports may not solve the problem of safety and may even lead to unintended consequences. For example, in many countries, there is a ban on motorcycles and car racing, but this simply drives it underground, where it is even harder to monitor. This would make it even more difficult to ensure the safety of participants, as they may be engaging in the sport without proper equipment or training.
In conclusion, the debate over dangerous sports is a complex one. I believe the best approach may be to regulate extreme sports, rather than completely prohibit them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
..., I will explore both views and give my personal opinion on this matter. On the other hand, it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.190625 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94757414824 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590625 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5482593226 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.733333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287503375735 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875615179778 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115065700526 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141126683688 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121298849591 0.056905535591 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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