A person should never make an important decision alone. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
It is inevitable to take important decisions throughout our lives. Some people believe that adult people should take their own decisions without the help of others. However, from my everyday experience and observations, I strongly argue that the discussion of an important matter with others before taking a decision bring benefits.
To begin with, different people have different opinions. In order to make the right choice, people should be aware of the consequences of the decision, both positive and negative. People can share their knowledge and experiences and it enables to look the matter f...
Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
---|---|---|---|
2013-12-24 | AryaPengaringan | 68 | view |
2012-12-28 | Tessy James | 83 | view |
- Technology has facilitated our lives so much and given us a lot of freedom. Some people believe that this freedom has caused more problem for us. What is your view? 93
- Some think that it is fair for convicts to spend time in position, while others think that community service would be better for criminals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 90
- People have different job expectations for job Some people prefer to do the same job for the same company Others prefer to change the jobs frequently Write advantages and disadvantages of each viewpoint 65
- The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the process shown.•You should wri 95
- Many shops work for 24 hours a day 7 days a week; some people see it as a good idea, while others don’t. Compare different views of customers, shop workers and the whole society of this subject and give your opinion about it. 97
Comments
Sir.. Thank you so much.. I
Sir..
Thank you so much..
I dodn't know how far it will stay..:)
This is my natural style, the topic was so simple. So I thought just try it in a cool style...
Thanks for your support and encouragment...
Tessy.
Tessy, you are welcome. We
Tessy, you are welcome. We like this style over other styles.
Tessy, good to see the Sentence-Sentence Coherence is high.
It is on top list:
http://www.testbig.com/essay-categories/ielts
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 359 350
No. of Characters: 1829 1500
No. of Different Words: 194 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.353 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.095 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.669 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 146 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 100 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 76 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 44 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.895 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.629 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.684 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.292 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.525 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.092 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5