As transport and accommodation problems increase in many cities, some governments encourage businesses to move to rural areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
it is true that transport and accommodation issues have increased in many urban areas, and some governments encourage businesses to move to rural areas. this essay aims to shed light on the reasons why I believe that the advantages of these initiatives are stripped of their drawback.
On the one hand, it is understandable why some people believe that moving these businesses to rural areas can place a heavy financial burden on the national budget. The government will have to spend a massive amount of money on a wide range of categories, such as salaries for employees or the construction and maintenance of facilities. For example, when the government decide to move whole businesses to rural areas, it may cost billions of dollars to implement it. this tax paper money should be invested in more important sectors of society, including healthcare and education, to improve the living quality of the general public. The argument in favour of moving businesses to rural areas is further fortified by the fact that it will cost lots of money to finish.
On the other hand, I side with those who say that moving to rural areas can have a beneficial impact on people’s health. it is scientifically proven that if the government decides to move those businesses, it may not just reduce the noise pollution and also air pollution. people will be at a lower risk of various health problems such as asthma, lung cancer and sleep disorders. The health issues may severely affect their living quality, it may also place a heavy financial burden on their families as healthcare services are increasingly expensive today. Furthermore, these campaigns can also serve as a measure of the issue of transportation and accommodation one of the most difficult problems for government to solve. Considering these reasons, the idea of moving to rural areas seems perfectly justifiable.
In conclusion, while there are arguments for moving business to rural areas, I would agree with that because of the benefits it can bring to our lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06824925816 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87885828458 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525222551929 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.0763121007 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315120125861 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108051733451 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970328975187 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194894529152 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788693408938 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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