You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Fossil fuels, such as coal, oil and natural gas, are used in many countries. The use of alternative sources of energy, including wind and solar power, is encouraged. Is this trend a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
The question of whether using renewable resources is a positive trend or not has raised much interest in
the public eye. While some people support this statement, there are others who condemn it for their
own reasons. Personally, I completely agree that the use of alternative energy is a beneficial
development.
There are two main reasons why using alternative sources of energy is referred to as a positive
improvement. First and foremost, using this type of sources can protect the environment. To be more
specific, when using some energy like wind or solar power, the amount of carbon dioxide is reduced
considerably in the atmosphere. Hence, it prevents the possibility of the greenhouse effect. For
instance, electricity is the result of renewable resources. In addition, using some means of transport
which use electricity can have positive effects on both the environment and people’s health as they
nearly do not emit any fumes.
Apart from the advantage expressed above, I believe that using renewable resources can also make the
energy prices stable. A good illustration for this case is that unlike fossil fuels expenses, which are
getting much higher because of the scarcity and limitation of the resources, alternative sources of
energy are unlimited and common. Therefore, their prices may not fluctuate or rise too much.
Furthermore, this also benefits the residents, who are living in poverty and do not have the ability to
pay for fossil fuel.
In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that using alternative sources
of energy is an advantageous development because it can benefit both the environment and the
residents. This kind of energy should be encouraged to use more in the future.
- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic Fossil fuels such as coal oil and natural gas are used in many countries The use of alternative sources of energy including wind and solar power is encouraged Is this trend a p 61
- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic Fossil fuels such as coal oil and natural gas are used in many countries The use of alternative sources of energy including wind and solar power is encouraged Is this trend a p 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
The question of whether using renewable resources is a positive...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, therefore, while, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32624113475 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90257270771 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542553191489 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8945554812 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.133333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265839783919 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928301226007 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646434627341 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823035767292 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574934240881 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.