Dear han,
Nice to talk to you about my great time in Korea. I appreciate our previous dinner with you. I'm very happy to have the opportunity to joint it with your family. I think I'll never forget the feeling I had this night.
I think it's a wonderful dinner with Korean foods. I'm so surprised with the taste, bibibap and tokkboki are so delicious. It is really the first time I have had the chance to try it in Korea. But your family's atmosphere is the best thing. Your family is so nice, they behave so nice toward me, exactly like a member of the family. Your parents are like my parents, and I'm really into it.
So, I told all my family about the happiness I have with you and your family. My family really wants to invite you and your family to come to Vietnam. Absolutely, we will have a closet dinner at my house. I really want to introduce Vietnam's culture to you. Hope you can consider that.
I need to get back to work now. I look forward to your reply. Send me a letter soon if you decide to come to Vietnam.
Best regards,
Vietanh
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ppreciate our previous dinner with you. Im very happy to have the opportunity to j...
^^
Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...y to joint it with your family. I think Ill never forget the feeling I had this nig...
^^^
Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...he feeling I had this night. I think its a wonderful dinner with Korean foods. I...
^^^
Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...s a wonderful dinner with Korean foods. Im so surprised with the taste, bibibap an...
^^
Line 5, column 369, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
.... Your parents are like my parents, and Im really into it. So, I told all my fa...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, really, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28358208955 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20083892819 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557213930348 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.7214520143 44.8134815571 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 45.3157894737 76.5299724578 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.5789473684 16.8248392259 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15789473684 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365849767852 0.216113520407 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110650115798 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912041978471 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224429968914 0.12726935374 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648602308514 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.0 8.37731958763 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.36 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.1 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ppreciate our previous dinner with you. Im very happy to have the opportunity to j...
^^
Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...y to joint it with your family. I think Ill never forget the feeling I had this nig...
^^^
Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...he feeling I had this night. I think its a wonderful dinner with Korean foods. I...
^^^
Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...s a wonderful dinner with Korean foods. Im so surprised with the taste, bibibap an...
^^
Line 5, column 369, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
.... Your parents are like my parents, and Im really into it. So, I told all my fa...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, really, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28358208955 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20083892819 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557213930348 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.7214520143 44.8134815571 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 45.3157894737 76.5299724578 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.5789473684 16.8248392259 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15789473684 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365849767852 0.216113520407 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110650115798 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912041978471 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224429968914 0.12726935374 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648602308514 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.0 8.37731958763 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.36 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.1 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.