In the editorial published in the newspaper, it is stated that better Oak city is only established if the government committee restrict to vote for the important decision to only the people of that city not to the people who works there and live outside that city. The authors of the newspaper came to the conclusion due to the hindrence of the some committee member by rising the foolish objection to make a certain decision of the committee. However, the conclusion drawn from the argument contain some unwarranted assumptions and in order to fully evaluate it's viability, the authors must give the proper answer for the followings questions.
Firstly, what if the committee member that raised objection to the some meetings decision are the main committee member that plays the vital role in the development of the certain rule and laws for the better development?. For instance, the committee member those raised objections to make decision in the some problems are better qualified for this positions and have better experienced that all expect them. There is also an possibilities that they raised objection through there knowledge depth and others can not understand the objections and make them a fool person. If either of the scenario is true, then the conclusion might get weaken.
Secondly, What if these committee member are plays vital role in development of many government decision?. The prompts include that they raised objections in some of the meetings and it not stated about what they do in more meetings. Perhaps, it might be a case that that people are supporting maximum agreement of the committee and reject to agree to some decision because this meetings is not in the favor for the development of the Oak city. If it is true then that conclusion may not be fully satisfied.
Lastly, If the person is not from the home city, does that mean that person can not understand the business policy of that city? . It might be a case that a person who born on outside the Oak city is working on the city during the starting of the careir and had an experiences of almost 20 years and also working in the same field for the long time but a resident of the Oak city had no experience .If it is true ,then it doesn't hold water.
In conclusion, the argument as it stands now, it is supported by the number of the flawed assumptions that can weaken it .If the authors is able to answer to the above question through a proper evaluation and based on the research data then the viability of the argument can be properly evaluated to restrict the membership of the committee for the people outside the Oak city.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 130 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 458 350
No. of Characters: 2128 1500
No. of Different Words: 179 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.626 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.646 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.566 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 145 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 103 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 82 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 56 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 32.714 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 16.486 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.786 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.384 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.384 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.118 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
... conclusion due to the hindrence of the some committee member by rising the foolish ...
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Line 1, column 351, Rule ID: SOME_FACULTY[1]
Message: Use 'committee members'.
Suggestion: committee members
...lusion due to the hindrence of the some committee member by rising the foolish objection ...
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Line 1, column 500, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nclusion drawn from the argument contain some unwarranted assumptions and in orde...
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Line 2, column 68, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...tee member that raised objection to the some meetings decision are the main committe...
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Line 2, column 306, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...ised objections to make decision in the some problems are better qualified for this...
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Line 2, column 323, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o make decision in the some problems are better qualified for this positions and ...
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Line 2, column 346, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...some problems are better qualified for this positions and have better experienced t...
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Line 2, column 425, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ced that all expect them. There is also an possibilities that they raised objectio...
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Line 2, column 425, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an possibility' or simply 'possibilities'?
Suggestion: an possibility; possibilities
...ced that all expect them. There is also an possibilities that they raised objection through ther...
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Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this committee' or 'these committees'?
Suggestion: this committee; these committees
...on might get weaken. Secondly, What if these committee member are plays vital role in developm...
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Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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...eject to agree to some decision because this meetings is not in the favor for the de...
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Line 3, column 445, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...or for the development of the Oak city. If it is true then that conclusion may not...
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Line 4, column 129, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...stand the business policy of that city? . It might be a case that a person who b...
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Line 4, column 156, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f that city? . It might be a case that a person who born on outside the Oak city ...
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Line 4, column 263, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an experience' or simply 'experiences'?
Suggestion: an experience; experiences
...ring the starting of the careir and had an experiences of almost 20 years and also working in ...
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Line 4, column 398, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...sident of the Oak city had no experience .If it is true ,then it doesnt hold water...
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Suggestion: If
...dent of the Oak city had no experience .If it is true ,then it doesnt hold water. ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ak city had no experience .If it is true ,then it doesnt hold water. In conclusio...
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Line 4, column 423, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...d no experience .If it is true ,then it doesnt hold water. In conclusion, the argumen...
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Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...he flawed assumptions that can weaken it .If the authors is able to answer to the ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
... flawed assumptions that can weaken it .If the authors is able to answer to the ab...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 13.6137724551 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 28.8173652695 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 55.5748502994 103% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2167.0 2260.96107784 96% => OK
No of words: 457.0 441.139720559 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74179431072 5.12650576532 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62816894089 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 204.123752495 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.411378555799 0.468620217663 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 678.6 705.55239521 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.8473053892 140% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.5503193615 57.8364921388 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.785714286 119.503703932 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6428571429 23.324526521 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 5.70786347227 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.25449101796 419% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221112249279 0.218282227539 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729012699744 0.0743258471296 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746057130946 0.0701772020484 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127224350706 0.128457276422 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774530620085 0.0628817314937 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 14.3799401198 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 48.3550499002 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.197005988 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.5979740519 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.32208582834 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 98.500998004 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.1389221557 133% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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