Some people say that men are naturally more competitive than women. What extent do you agree or disagree?
In the process of social development, cooperation is the core thing to help humanity move forward in the future. However, in that cooperation, competition between people cannot be avoided. And it is said that men always vie with others while women does not. This essay will illustrate the reasons why i am not up with this opinion.
To begin with, men are quite sociable, maybe a little of them is selfish and competitive, but most of men are friendly and easy-going. Although men sometimes have a high ego, they still know how to cooperate and make friend in a group. To illustrate that, in my football club, desspite having argument sometimes, boys usually make up with each other soon. Not like girls, they always stay angry for a long time and never make up first.
Furthermore, in a group, there are always revalries. Not only men vying with others, but women also does. Some data figure out that women always hot-tempered and desire to be the best, so it can be guessed that women are totally competive than men. For example, in my class, my female classmates are always study harder than male ones because they don't want to get the lower score than anyone else. Especially, sometimes, that competition turn into "toxic''' because girls always want to own things that other people have, and that makes a negative energy in my class.
In conclusion, boys are always sociable and friendly in a group and they know how to make up with each other whenever there is argument. However, girls seems like more angry and competitive than boys.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s essay will illustrate the reasons why i am not up with this opinion. To begi...
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Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the men') or simply say ''most men''.
Suggestion: most of the men; most men
...of them is selfish and competitive, but most of men are friendly and easy-going. Although m...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 308, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'studied'.
Suggestion: studied
... class, my female classmates are always study harder than male ones because they dont...
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Line 7, column 349, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...tudy harder than male ones because they dont want to get the lower score than anyone...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, may, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80597014925 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49981064108 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589552238806 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3428559284 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152495151253 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545405252719 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538457571975 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937368118408 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404018535386 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s essay will illustrate the reasons why i am not up with this opinion. To begi...
^
Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the men') or simply say ''most men''.
Suggestion: most of the men; most men
...of them is selfish and competitive, but most of men are friendly and easy-going. Although m...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 308, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'studied'.
Suggestion: studied
... class, my female classmates are always study harder than male ones because they dont...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 349, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...tudy harder than male ones because they dont want to get the lower score than anyone...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, may, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80597014925 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49981064108 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589552238806 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3428559284 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152495151253 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545405252719 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538457571975 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937368118408 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404018535386 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.