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Essay evaluations by e-grader

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: ATM_MACHINE[2]
Message: This phrase is redundant ('M' stands for 'machine'). Use simply 'atms'.
Suggestion: atms
...cards which can withdraw money from any atm machines around the world. I was very poor befor...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...I was very poor before and have no job. I saw so many testimony about how Dark We...
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Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun testimony seems to be countable; consider using: 'many testimonies'.
Suggestion: many testimonies
...y poor before and have no job. I saw so many testimony about how Dark Web Online Hackers send ...
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Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: ATM_MACHINE[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant ('M' stands for 'machine'). Use simply 'atm'.
Suggestion: atm
...card and use it to collect money in any atm machine and become rich {DARKWEBONLINEHACKERS@G...
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Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...so and they sent me the blank atm card. I have use it to get 500,000 dollars. wit...
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Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Withdraw
.... I have use it to get 500,000 dollars. withdraw the maximum of 5,000 USD daily. Dark We...
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Line 3, column 565, Rule ID: ATM_MACHINE[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant ('M' stands for 'machine'). Use simply 'atm'.
Suggestion: atm
.... Hack and take money directly from any atm machine vault with the use of atm programmed ca...
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Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... also contact them for the service below * Western Union/MoneyGram Transfer ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 35, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...w * Western Union/MoneyGram Transfer * Bank Transfer * PayPal / Skrill Tr...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.../MoneyGram Transfer * Bank Transfer * PayPal / Skrill Transfer * Crypto ...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 27, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Transfer * PayPal / Skrill Transfer * Crypto Mining * CashApp Transfer ...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al / Skrill Transfer * Crypto Mining * CashApp Transfer * Bitcoin Loans ...
^^^^^
Line 15, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... * Crypto Mining * CashApp Transfer * Bitcoin Loans * Recover Stolen/Miss...
^^^^^
Line 21, column 38, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Email: darkwebonlinehackers@gmail.com Email: info@darkwebonlinehackers.com ...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74096385542 4.92477711251 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.74733864433 2.65546596893 179% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638554216867 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 124.440183924 43.030603864 289% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 119.125 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 3.83414634146 261% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415155189707 0.215688989381 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156798503778 0.103423049105 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.189439583343 0.0843802449381 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157683184156 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.303058065908 0.0819641961636 370% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 11.4140731707 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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