Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free.
I disagree with this issue. Because formal education has a barrier. Formal education does not tend to restrain not only our minds but also our spirits. Formal education system provides certain lessons and certain practical knowledge. It makes us as a bookish person. But
as a bookish person you can't solve the practical problem in our daily life. Formal education provides certain boundary and it has a limitation. It can't connect us with academic knowledge and practical problem. Formal education can't minimize
the complicated problem. In our daily life day to day, man-made problem is going to be increased. Free education recognizes it and formal doesn't.
We can not forecast the complicated problem and correlate between problem and solution such as environmental problem, chemical problem, pollution problem etc. Free education provides us how to solve a problem easily and how to invent any kind of matters or products to appease the situation.
Through formal education we can make a logic against any issue. But is it possible to implement the issue that is not provided.
Through free education, we can make a logic perfectly against any kind of issue. It provides all kinds of knowledge to solve the problem. Free education always retrains our spirits. It sporadic our minds.
Formal education helps to start a thinking to invent something or solve some problems. But free education helps to design a thinking to invent something or solve some problem. Education means free and not boundary . We should redesign the educational system and make it free.
As an example, wastewater treatment plant means it has physical, chemical and biological section. According to formal education we just make a plant where physical, chemical and biological section exist but It depends on some factors. Free education provides these.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
I disagree with this issue. Because formal education has a barrier. Formal ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...It makes us as a bookish person. But as a bookish person you cant solve the pra...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “as” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...It makes us as a bookish person. But as a bookish person you cant solve the pra...
^^
Line 3, column 25, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... person. But as a bookish person you cant solve the practical problem in our dail...
^^^^
Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...in boundary and it has a limitation. It cant connect us with academic knowledge and ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
...in boundary and it has a limitation. It cant connect us with academic knowledge and ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...and practical problem. Formal education cant minimize the complicated problem. In...
^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...blem. Formal education cant minimize the complicated problem. In our daily life ...
^^^
Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...Free education recognizes it and formal doesnt. We can not forecast the complicated...
^^^^^^
Line 13, column 214, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...m. Education means free and not boundary . We should redesign the educational syst...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 294.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2925170068 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73008708045 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 215.323595506 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452380952381 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 23.0359550562 48% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2544653762 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.8461538462 118.986275619 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.3076923077 23.4991977007 48% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.34615384615 5.21951772744 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267809668507 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992368667907 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939371702032 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141139320126 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756770239979 0.0667264976115 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 48.8420337079 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.22 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.8971910112 42% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 11.2143820225 57% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
I disagree with this issue. Because formal education has a barrier. Formal ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...It makes us as a bookish person. But as a bookish person you cant solve the pra...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “as” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...It makes us as a bookish person. But as a bookish person you cant solve the pra...
^^
Line 3, column 25, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... person. But as a bookish person you cant solve the practical problem in our dail...
^^^^
Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...in boundary and it has a limitation. It cant connect us with academic knowledge and ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
...in boundary and it has a limitation. It cant connect us with academic knowledge and ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...and practical problem. Formal education cant minimize the complicated problem. In...
^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...blem. Formal education cant minimize the complicated problem. In our daily life ...
^^^
Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...Free education recognizes it and formal doesnt. We can not forecast the complicated...
^^^^^^
Line 13, column 214, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...m. Education means free and not boundary . We should redesign the educational syst...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 294.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2925170068 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73008708045 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 215.323595506 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452380952381 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 23.0359550562 48% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2544653762 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.8461538462 118.986275619 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.3076923077 23.4991977007 48% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.34615384615 5.21951772744 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267809668507 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992368667907 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939371702032 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141139320126 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756770239979 0.0667264976115 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 48.8420337079 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.22 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.8971910112 42% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 11.2143820225 57% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.