You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before. You have a friend who lives there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
explain your situation
say why you feel unsure about living in the city
ask some questions about life in the city.
This is the question
Dear Amit ,
How are you doing nowdays?. It's been a long time since we met. I hope this letter finds you well.
I am writing you the letter to share a good news with you that I got a job in Singapore which is yours city.
But the thing is that I never had
visited the Singapore before. Also, i am very nervous about moving to new city for the first time in my life.
Moreover, main thing is the weather in Singapore. I heard it’s hot throughout the whole year which is very worrying because i have been in
a cold weather since my childhood.
Although, you are born there. So, I wanted to ask you some questions about the life over there. The first thing i want to know is about the average rent for one bedroom apartment. Also, the frequency and costs of the transportation in the city.
I am expecting a fast reply from you. I hope we will stay together after finalising my job.
Best wishes
Tanveer
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Dear Amit , How are you doing nowdays?. Its been ...
^^
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Amit , How are you doing nowdays?. Its been a l...
^^^
Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good news'.
Suggestion: good news
... I am writing you the letter to share a good news with you that I got a job in Singapore ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ad visited the Singapore before. Also, i am very nervous about moving to new cit...
^
Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... in a cold weather since my childhood. Although, you are born there. So, I wanted to as...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 113, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ut the life over there. The first thing i want to know is about the average rent ...
^
Line 10, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r after finalising my job. Best wishes Tanveer
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31976744186 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32533804703 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622093023256 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8556560987 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 49.5333333333 76.5299724578 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.4666666667 16.8248392259 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316979132198 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894576818921 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868265765035 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118869023673 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950965168544 0.0580467560999 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 8.37731958763 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.59 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Dear Amit , How are you doing nowdays?. Its been ...
^^
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Amit , How are you doing nowdays?. Its been a l...
^^^
Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good news'.
Suggestion: good news
... I am writing you the letter to share a good news with you that I got a job in Singapore ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ad visited the Singapore before. Also, i am very nervous about moving to new cit...
^
Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... in a cold weather since my childhood. Although, you are born there. So, I wanted to as...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 113, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ut the life over there. The first thing i want to know is about the average rent ...
^
Line 10, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r after finalising my job. Best wishes Tanveer
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31976744186 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32533804703 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622093023256 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8556560987 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 49.5333333333 76.5299724578 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.4666666667 16.8248392259 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316979132198 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894576818921 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868265765035 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118869023673 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950965168544 0.0580467560999 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 8.37731958763 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.59 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.