The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map below illustrates the main changes which will take place in an industrial area in the town of Norbiton in the future.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that there will be more social utilities in this place. Furthermore, there are plans to build a bridge across the river.
Looking at the detail, at present, there are lots of unused spaces in the area. Later in life, these places are going to be used to construct facilities that serve society such as a school, a playground, a medical centre, shops. In the north, a bridge will be constructed to facilitate travel to the farmland area. Also, there will be an emergence of housing in the farmland. As can be seen from the map, at a later stage of life, it is planned that housing will be added to this place. The road which leads to the town in the west is planned to be expanded.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 686.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39743589744 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41845985298 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9700015669 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2222222222 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132081636706 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649060678384 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821089167653 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128374799698 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113768191814 0.0819641961636 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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