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...o particular genre of songs. For example , Indians living in an Arab country will ...
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...e to listen to an arabian genre of songs , they will be facing problem in understa...
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...ke they are not connected with that song . This sort of experience is not a positi...
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...tting bringing people together. Secondly , kids like more of listening to cartoon ...
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...ning to cartoon or animation based music , whereas the young adults will not prefe...
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...ctively. On the other hand ,there are other numerous ways to bring p...
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...ous people tend to celebrate it together .Additionally , they will conduct differe...
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...mpetitions among all age group of people , where they get to know about each other...
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...each other without any discrimination. To sum it up ,music is not the way to cr...
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...nited irrespective of culture and age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, sort of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13389121339 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76456714095 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63179916318 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.665403297 49.4020404114 236% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.285714286 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1428571429 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.1428571429 7.06120827912 257% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198995440449 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897929762058 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373444278918 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13627557624 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.010782160434 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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