People are living longer. Some people think that this causes big problems. Others, however, think the aging population has many advantages for business, government and for society in general. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People are living longer. Some people think that this causes big problems. Others, however, think the aging population has many advantages for business, government and for society in general. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The question of whether social, governmental and economic aspects of a nation are beneficially affected by the aging population often invites polarized perspectives. While some individuals contend that this is an advantageous tendency, there is also a strong belief that this propensity is adverse. Even though both assertions, having their own set of merits, are fervently championed by different factions, the following elaboration will first delve into both of them meticulously and then my negative assessment of this matter.
On the one hand, it emerges conspicuously that seniors, particularly middle-aged ones, are of vital significance for the national politics, economy and society. In terms of politics, candidates who have a colossal amount of experience would be favoured on account of the fact that these experiences could prevent their nation from tangling into other countries’ pitfalls. In the prospect of the national economy, foreign investments would be drawn by utilising precious leaders’ experience as a medium to reach lucrative compromises with other countries in the vicinity. A living testament to this would be Xuan Phuc, the 60-year-old former Vietnamese chairman. He took advantage of his incredible communication skill to nurture a profound bond with the USA, which in turn attracted various American companies to invest in Vietnam. As a society-related result, living standards would be significantly enhanced by making use of an aging source of labor.
On the other hand, it seems to me that the aforementioned aspects' demerits could surpass their merits. Regarding politics, young brilliant candidates would be disfavoured because of the prejudice that experiential and traditional ways of operating a country are better than revolutionary ones. An unfair election would take place as a serious consequence, thus overlooking a potentially great leader of the country. Besides, in terms of the national economy, elderly people would be a salient reason that leads to economic recession and inflation because of their incapability of dedicating a substantial amount of time working, due to their low level of fitness. Subsequently, in terms of society, the young are detrimentally affected because they have to pay much more painstaking efforts to meet the fundamental requirements of not only them but also their old family members. A case in point is Japan, which witnessed a dramatic surge in the proportion of people aged more than 65, is enduring financial hardship and becomes heavily reliant on foreign employees. If this source of labour were eliminated, a serious bankruptcy in Japan would be established.
In conclusion, after detailed consideration of both pros and cons of the old generation on national politics, society and economy, I am firmly convinced that its adverse bearings significantly outweigh its beneficial impacts. In addition, it is deemed that countries ought to base on their own conditions to decide whether the increasing percentage of elderly people is profitable and whether they should impose laws to ameliorate the circumstance or not.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, look, regarding, so, then, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2844.0 1615.20841683 176% => OK
No of words: 514.0 315.596192385 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53307392996 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76146701107 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12841192868 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 298.0 176.041082164 169% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579766536965 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 894.6 506.74238477 177% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.363652414 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.272727273 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22727272727 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278266680853 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942285894128 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123535437902 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222344161306 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.290784809061 0.056905535591 511% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 171.0 78.4519038076 218% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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