Some people prefer to travel alone. They say that if they travel alone they will be free. Although i understand their point of view, but i have a different opinion. I believe that travel with a companion is better because we will have more fun, and the travelling with a group will be less expensive.
First, some people prefer to travel alone to get rid of responsibility . For example, my brother last year traveled to China by himself. At first he thought that he will be happier if he went alone. He visited a lot of places , but then he gets bored. As a result he shorten his trip from 10 days to 5 days only, and he decided that he will never traveled alone any more. On the other hand i traveled with my friends to India. It was a really nice trip. We laughed a lot ,we took a lot of pictures together. The time flied , and we never get bored. At the end we decided to extend our trip for 2 days more.
Next, travelling with a group let the expenses less. For example, when my brother traveled to China, he rented a car for $100 daily, and he paid $ 120 daily to the hotel for renting his room. So it was too expensive to him, and this added a factor in his boring. On contrary, when i traveled to India with my friends, all expenses were shared. All the payments of the renting car, room , and even the meals at the restaurant had shared, and we had enough money to spend on 2 days more. That's why the trip will cost less with a group.
To put everything in a nut shell, for the reasons stated above , i encourage all the people to travel with a group. Why not try to travel with your friends next vacation for few days? You will have a lot of fun , and i'm sure you would love to travel with a companion.
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Although i understand their point of view, but i have a different opinion.
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he shorten his trip from 10 days to 5 days only,
he shortens his trip from 10 days to 5 days only,
he will never traveled alone any more
he will never travel alone any more
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