Some people argue that more money should be invested by the governance in teaching science rather than other courses and I agree. Because science is a vast subject that assists in the development of medical streams and discoveries outside the planet.
To begin with, teaching science provide a great assistance to develop new advancements in medical health care. To illustrate, new advancement to find out genetic abnormalities in foetus while growing in womb of the mother at 20 weeks is a boon for humans. Therefore, I think that government should invest more amount of money on this subject instead others.
Furthermore, I believe that laughing satellites in order to access weather forecast is also a part of science and technology which is highly beneficial to aware about weather in advance. According to a recent survey done by Stanford University artificial satellites provide great assistance to get familiar with environment on moon. As a result, in my perspective, investing on such subjects is a good way by the government to enhance research.
In conclusion, latest advancements in the medical healthcare system and astronomy is only possible if government should invest on such sort of subjects irrespective of other courses.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the latest'.
Suggestion: , the latest
...t to enhance research. In conclusion, latest advancements in the medical healthcare ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, sort of, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 198.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30808080808 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02086493181 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0406271401 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 116.777777778 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5555555556 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326104579868 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135368998089 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147485406358 0.0667982634062 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200879882596 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117766493368 0.056905535591 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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