In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent years, many countries have witnessed a significant rise in civilians' life expentancy. For example, in Japan, it is common to see people living over 90 years. Some people believe that this trend is likely to bring some burdens to governments, while others think it is beneficial to have more elderly members in society. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the problem and give my own opinion.
To begin with, let us look into the potential disadvantages that elder population could bring. First of all, it could cause financial issue to governments. As the number of retired workers increases, goverments would have to spend large budgets on pensions and other social welfares for the elderly. Along with that, to take care of senior people, more hospitals and nursing homes are also needed. Building those infrastructures may require a considerable amount of fees, labour, and time.
On the other hand, society could benefit from having elder people. Since people who live longer tend to adopt a healthy lifestyle, they could set examples and share their experience on living healthily. By doing this, it is possible that youngsters will follow them, consequently improving the public health. Additionally, when the population life expectancy goes higher, governments could consider raising the retirement age. Not only does this mitigate the pension issue, but it also enhances the quality of workforce as there are more experienced employees.
All in all, having an ageing population could be both advantageous and disadvantageous. Nevertheless, I hold the idea that with appropriate policies from authorities, the drawbacks could be outweighed by the benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, while, for example, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90343591336 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689138576779 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4900613153 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273204725813 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716920995388 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682446491318 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145237365094 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772619437914 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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